I'm Ready

by Tricky Daze   Mar 9, 2007


Rain drops are trying so hard to stop me
Wind's voice is becoming a silent scream
But my belief is strong,my willing is steady
It's not time to give up not now as I'm ready

Cried so many times to release my pain
Fought back with a million ways
But now I'm strong enough to be insane
Fear of me when I will be ready

You're acting like you don't care as always
But now you see a burning flame in my eyes
Flame's burning to hurt like you did with your lies
I'll distinguish all my hate for you as I'm ready

As lightning's giving me a light of this darkness
Weather gets cold but my inner anger keeps me warm
I won't get enough till you get I'm something that'd harm
You should have known you'd be ended up in hospital
Cos I was ready...........

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  • 14 years ago

    by Pink Butterfly

    "But now I'm strong enough to be insane"....how I love these lines. i can totally relate!!! Wonderful job for this!!! Thanks for penning such poem. God bless you!!!

    -Pink Butterfly-

  • 16 years ago

    by Noelle Wright

    Umm wow what an odd poem but great in its own little deep way 5/5 not like you need it or anything HAHA Great poem

    Noelle Wright

  • 17 years ago

    by cory

    That was so dark and awsome i thought this 1 really expressed your rage well.= )

    Cory

  • 17 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!

    Im ready, i love the entire piece it show a powerful determination, hope and will for doing what you want! this poem is great! well penned with such thoughts!

    keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    Loved your poem
    Laura keep it up
    I like the line
    Lightning acting as a light in dark
    Gr8 imagination
    5/5
    your never to be forgotten friend
    Rohan

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