Very varied rhyme scheme, which can be hard to follow at times.

Besides that, though, this poem is great. It's got a definite and clear meaning that most readers can relate to.

5/5

I love how you make each poem diffent and have it's own spirt.
Another great one Kristina ^.^
Keep up the great work
xoxox Rhea

This one is perfect, i couldn't find a thing wrong with it. You shared your feeling very well, and the flow was great. 5/5