Good job i really appreciate this
poem and thanks cy

Short and simple sentences and each hold one holds such deep meaning.

"i promise not to follow you
in the track of your bad life."

Thats one of the greatest promises you can make someone who wants you to live right.
Excellent little poem!
5/5
*Gem*

Great poem. take cy' s advice, he's right!

Well yea.. i promised my mom alot of things like not to smoke cigarettes, weed and drink. but i started to smoke weed at the age of 12, drink age of 12 and smoke cigarettes at the age of 14..well yea. i quit smoking ciggs thank god because i don't like smelling like an ashtray, smoking weed idk its just idk..well anyways drinking stopped. well good poem...i liked it ALOT

Don't ever forget your promise cy

Just checking to see if ur keeping ur promise
cy

Just checking iin don't forget ur promise

I hope that this is a promise 4ever
your friends will make this a hard promise one day there's no way to stop that from happening. Its a part of life teenagers always
have to try dumb stuff but. you have to rise
above them and show them that that is a losER life. BE A LEADER NOT A FOLLOWER
yOU just made my day just hearing from you with such good news. there's so much
bad stuff in the world that its cool to hear
something good. cy