by Unrequited Mar 9, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Soon we all perish. |
I love your use of language in this poem... great choice of words....5/5 |
by Tricky Daze
It would be better if you caps lock the capital letters and some symbol interrupted the poem |
by Just Lucy
That is sooo sweet, but somehow really sad. the flow was great and i loved your wording. you were able to put such a complicated thing into such great words |