Wow so good expression way and good wording i liked it especially those

Douse our love
full moon above
perfect night for an ending
perfect night for hells descending,

Perfect,keep it up

Climbing through our tree
cuts throughout my arm
life being but a dream
living without your charm,

^ Flat-out amazing!!! =] That stanza was my favorite, no contest.
The poem was like reading a kind of story, so descriptive & the emotions were vivid. Fantastic, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Nice description! I loved the words and it flowed nicely great job