Great poem,but tripp, i need u. dont kill urself. please and thanks.

You better not do anything ridiculous! I may not know you in person, but from reading your poems, I have sincere love for you!

Wow- POWERFULL. I was a little confused. Your statement is a little unclear. But either way you kicked some a*s with it. Great job! I'm sorry about earlier... But God hasnt forgotten you. He has his own bizzare timing, but whatever way it works. Just like girls are to guys -it is inexplainable. The fact that he has people thinkin and constantly coming to him, tells you something. Believe me your going to get your answers what ever they may be. Oh by the way your second stanza has 5 lines and the rest have four, incase you didnt notice. But on with it, lol I love the emotions you draw out with this one. There are no imagry descriptions but you can still get a picture from your rhythm, and the emotion that flows from your words. Its great. In all the second stanza was my favorite. The "nappin" thing was funny, and the flow was great. The rhymes were good aswell. Its also good how you waited until the ending to bring the title into the piece. Its like what I did with my poem the Love thorn. Its great. keep it up.

God Bless

~skittles