I can't

by I will love you Forever and not a day less   Mar 9, 2007


I can't take it anymore,
You say just wait,
and hold on,
But you just don't realize,
what its doing to me,
Its killin me,
killin me softly,
I cant take it,
You just don't understand,
You think u do,
but u don't,
so i want to go,
with or without u,
Like i said i cant take it,

Take it anymore............

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  • 17 years ago

    by The battleground in your heart

    I like this poem more than your other ones because it speaks to the reader and tells how you feel.
    Its GREAT!!!! 5/5 :)

  • 17 years ago

    by ihaveasadheart

    Such a great poem, a lot different from your others, they are all good though. you're not alone in the ways you feel. i hope that things get better.
    keep it up.
    i give it a five out of five.

  • 17 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    This is a very nice poem, i really enjoyed reading it. i no how u feel. keep it up 5/5 =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Aussie

    Finally a poem that's very open. i can take it in so many ways. keep writing:)

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