by Marc Ortiz
Wow I really dont like short poem but this was very beautiful! it all happened in a moment of time! well done! This is very unique! well done I love the imagery! you're really talented! keep writing! 5/5!! as always! |
WOW!!.....beautiful work...lovely..amazing,perfect...soo filled wth passion...just soo beyond words!... |
by Carmen
Haha, that was one of the most creative short poems i've read... ur a very interesting author. i like ur poems. 5/5 |
Omg , i cant even explain how addicted you got me to continue reading.......put it this way as of now ur definately in my fav list! |
by Tricky Daze
It was really unique and eliminated..especially ( ) made it different from all others |
by Boy
Nice thoughts of writing. nicely thinking and then describing the beauty of the words in this poem short but very to the point. good work take care 5/5 |
This is amazing you put the words so perfectly together and made an osm poem great write |
by unblue skye
Great poem, i liked it... it felt like u were talking to meh xD lol but 5/5 i liked it alot it wuz put together nicely! ^_^ |
by Debbie
You capture your theme with a subliminal exercise (breathing) that makes it wholly engaging. The pitch was hurried and emotions raw and captivating. I enjoyed this piece, Mindy. Nice piece. |
by Brittany
I love how you did this. When I read it the first time (before you requested I comment it) I honestly thought it was SO unique and cool. I still think that. I love the concept. I'd love to see you write another poem like this. It absolutely stunned me in a good way. |
by Jenni Marie
Ohhhh wow...this brought tears to my eyes... |