Crime

by David   Mar 9, 2007


1 is the loneliest number
In the whole wide world
cause I know I will be always lonely
cause I know love wont come and find me!

But I would cry if you went away
From me on this cold and bleak day.
And I know that you would leave
If u didnt believe
That I love you all the time
You say that I was a crime.

That I tainted your life
Made you not want to live
Made you want to lay down
Alone in a dark town
With nothing to give
And no point to live

So I walk on the dusty road,
And out into the night
I feel like I am going to explode,
Cause im walking out of your sight

So I think to myself
That I will put myself aside
On the hidden shelf
To try to be alone, to hide

Cause what is love if you cant have it?
And what is death if you cant see it?
Our friendship is forever
But thats all it can be
You know you dont want me

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  • 17 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    Well, the 1st stanza doesn't really fit with the rest of the poem. But it was a really good poem none-the-less. Such deep terrible sadness... so heart wrenching, because everyone has at one point or another, felt the same way.. lost and hopeless, because the one they love doesn't feel the same. The flow and word choice were superb as always 5/5 as usual my friend
    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.

  • 17 years ago

    by firexdancer

    This is so sad, but so sweet.... it was so beautiful. 5/5 forevor!
    gabriella

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    A very sad poem and a mixture of texts
    This was an overall well achieved poem.
    4.5
    -EM

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    Simply amazing. There were so many emotions that you portrayed in this poem, wonderful job! wow! can't wait to read more from you.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Oh my Gosh!!! David! This is terribly sad! Your amazing! You will never be alone...trust me...your just to amazing for that!! 5/5
    love always

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