by ~* gifted little fallen~* Mar 9, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I lie in my world of dreams |
It is good to love but better to be loved. |
by PygmyPuff
This is rather deep, but it seems as though there is no purpose. The last two lines are the only lines that seem to have a point, and the rest is just description which deaws back from the poem. Capitalize the letter "i" nd add a plot and itd be great. |