Battle

Wow.. so emotional.. great job. The flow is wonderful, and I like how you create visual interest with the 6th stanza being a line longer. Flow and rythmn are wonderful, as usual! You have some awesome talent, keep up the good work! 5/5
Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

This is really quite good David. If this is about what you were feeling I think we need to talk. But this is really well written, the flow was good and it told the story well with emotion. And congratulations for getting on the front page! I'm so happy hehe. Anyway, great poem. 5/5

Tammie

Awww all of your poems are so sad! and they are all about you losing someone dear to you, a lost love maybe?? well yourpoems show that you really do care, again a 5/5 and

A very frustrating poem.
Expressive in every way.
Sad yet spiced with anger.
Almost perfect rhyme but still could use some work.

4.5

A very good poem.
You interrupt the flow ones, but that's not very disturbing.
Keep it up.