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-liz-

I really like this. You have really nice rhyiming skills. I only have one suggestion.... you might want to work on the ending of this one. but other than that you're really a great writer!

Wow ^_^

Aww its sad but its really really good! i liked how you compared the knife to the love...its good!

This is sad but i really liked it. u put so much feeling into it. ur a very talented writter at a young age. 5/5 keep up the good work. *best of wishes*

thanx 4 comenting on my poem, it means a lot <3
XoXoXo

~*~Missunderstood tears~*~

Very nice, depressing but good. well done.
xx

Yeah i know what you mean...like ive had a bunch of boyfriends...but they weren;t for like a week each...like my longest so far was with drew, for almost 2 years...we broke up bc he had to move...my shortest was w. this guys spencer who i went out for 2 1/2 months, because we never hung out.... but yeah....

no i dont have a myspace haha..i dont think ive ever been to sc haha...but comment back!!

Haha np...whens your project due?...both of mine are due tmmrw...its almost 1 am...and im like stressed haha...bc i need to finish my projects so i can hang w. shane haha

Yay!!! you get to hang with wil!!...i just finished by 1st project and now I have to do my 2nd...im trying my hardest because i NEED to hang out with shane haha....but have fun with wil and tell me how it was when you come back haha

Haha movie theaters are mucho fun haha...im so tired i just got back from my dance classes...and now im soo tired... its 7:19, and ive been there since 4...haha...i think im gonna go to the gym? haha....maybe...then maybeee shanes house!!!! haha i hope soo..but comment back and ill comment you back when i gets home haha

Haha...wow im soo tired...like 5 hours of working out bc of dance too...wow...its like 10 30..and i just got home from by babys house haha...but yeah comment backkkkkk pweazzz haha

Haha...well yesterday i was over his house for like 2 1/2 hours... we like watched a movie, and i had dinner with him, and we kissed a little haha.. and we hung out w. his little brothers who are 14, and 16...so yeah haha... i havent been up to much lately... ive been extemely busy, with dance, lacrosse, softball, and hanging with shane and my friends haha..what about you? how are you lately? hows wil? haha/...comment back

Awww thats soo cute!! was that your first kiss too, or do you have expierence in that haha...my hair is like 2 or 3 inches below my shoulders.. haha commmennt back

Aww thanks!...when shane sent it to me i was about to cry, because he took time to write a poem for me!!!... none of my boyfriends like ever wrote a poem for me!!..i even said to him, i didnt know that you could write poetry and he said "well i cant! i wrote it as a song, but made it poetic"...haha..he makes me laugh

so you dont see wil during the days?... are you in middle school? and hes in high school?... but yeah i am lucky to get to see shane everyday....comment back!!

Wow hes homeschooled... thats pretty cool... i go to a public high school haha, and im glad bc if i didn't then i wouldnt have met shanee!!!.... comment back!!... yeah me and shane go to church together too!! haha

Oo thats cool!!...yeah i just got back from softball.. it got cut short bc it started to rain...but luckily im going to go to the movies, and your right were prolly not going to watch the movies-> we never do ;) haha.... but yeah im excited, and were like going to leave at like 9:30 bc the movie starts at 10, so well prolly be back reallly really late tonight... or we might just stay at my house... we dont know yet... i think i wanna stay at my house, becaause i hate driving in the rain.. haha..but yeah comment back!! i hope your having fun!

How was last night at the wrestling show?

O thats fun... i have nooo idea what movie we saw haha...;)... then i came home like reallyy late haha

Actually we saw TMNT haha it was pretty good, well the parts that i saw haha...comment backkk!!!

Thats cool...omg guess what... shane came over, and i signed online, when he was in my room... so all of a sudden an IM pops up from my ex, drew,(who moved away and who i went out w. for almost 2 years), and it says "hey baby! i miss you so much! i love you"... meanwhile shanes sitting right over my shoulder, and the whole time im thinking ****... bc i havent talked to drew since me and shane started going out so he didnt know i had a bf... shane was like i got to go.. and he like left!... omg im so scared he like thinks i was cheating on him or something.. im gonna call him right now and tell him what happened im soo nervous ahh comment back