Submission

by Shatter   Mar 10, 2007


I can't give up
I won't fall under your submission
I just won't take it
Your stupid plan of rendition

I won't be your slave
I won't do your bidding
I won't ever commit myself
To that kind of living

To be told when to eat
To be told when to stand
To be told when to talk
That's something I just can't stand

I can't take that risk
Vulnerable to being used
Like some kind of tool
That's likely to be abused

I won't wake up
With all your tasks in mind
I won't go to sleep
With the thought of your nightmares at night

I won't be controlled
For you I will not stand
'Cuz my pride is something
You'll never understand

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  • 17 years ago

    by Allison

    This was an exellent poem and I love the message that it held. It was so beautiful and so wonderfully written. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

    Alyson