She let herself go

by xo kisses xo   Mar 10, 2007


He told her it was over
he just said goodbye
she felt the pain
but never did she cry

instead she eraced the memories
and made a final pact
she was going on with her life
and was never looking back

she let herself go
but didn't lose control
cuz she had her heart back
and for once it was whole

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  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    I think this is a really cute idea for a poem.. but more needs to be added.. at first you say she is sad and then within one stanza she goes to happiness because her heart is whole.. more needs to be added between the transistion.. also in this line "instead she eraced the memories" i think you meant to say "erased"

    other than that its a cute poem :D

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    I think this is a really cute idea for a poem.. but more needs to be added.. at first you say she is sad and then within one stanza she goes to happiness because her heart is whole.. more needs to be added between the transistion.. also in this line "instead she eraced the memories" i think you meant to say "erased"

    other than that its a cute poem :D

  • 17 years ago

    by malina

    I like it alot...great poem ^_^

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