Comments : She let herself go

  • 17 years ago

    by malina

    I like it alot...great poem ^_^

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    I think this is a really cute idea for a poem.. but more needs to be added.. at first you say she is sad and then within one stanza she goes to happiness because her heart is whole.. more needs to be added between the transistion.. also in this line "instead she eraced the memories" i think you meant to say "erased"

    other than that its a cute poem :D

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    I think this is a really cute idea for a poem.. but more needs to be added.. at first you say she is sad and then within one stanza she goes to happiness because her heart is whole.. more needs to be added between the transistion.. also in this line "instead she eraced the memories" i think you meant to say "erased"

    other than that its a cute poem :D