This is very good you can feel the sadness i feel the same as you... Keep it up

Wow this was an awesome poem.
I simply adored it and i could relate to yours too. thanx for the comment

I really liked the sorrow in this..it was awesome to read
Keep it up
Laura

Wow.. this is soo intense with feelings.. im glad your feeling better now.. the flow in this poem is reallly good and the word choice was nice.. the whole dear diary has been done in my opinion just too many times.. but besides that i really enjoyed this poem

Bravo! very well done!

I really enjoyed the imagery in this poem, especially the fourth stanza, the words were very strong and the flow was great as well. We all feel pain and have hard times, but it will always open our eyes to the good stuff we weren't paying attention to. Excellent job 5/5 GG23

I really hope you weren't going to kill yourself over a boy.. love is a hard thing but no boy is worth your suicide. nice poem though. 5/5

I like a lot this poem.And i'm happy that you're ok now.Congratulations.you're a talented writer,so keep on the good work.Take care of you,Michelle XxX

THAT POEM IS AMAZING...I BET MOST OF US HAVE HAD FEELING LIKE THAT BEFORE...GLAD TO KNOW YOU'RE BETTER NOW.

Wow.. i really like this poem.. the emotion is so strong.. the dear diary bit is a little cliche..but still the poem was very enjoyable 5/5

thanks for the comment on my poem ;]

Very depressing sorry about your hard times, i think alot of us have those years in our lives we feel that way and think about taking our lives. someone once told me.

No your path and it will lead you to your destination.
Stray from the path and alter your future and place among the heavens.

WOW!! Thats a really good poem!! I Liked It and I know how you felt i've had some hard times too so i could relate to it!!
Laterz!!