Wow.
This is an amazing poem.
Only one advice,
Try to make it have
The same syllabulls
For example
She's so random
I tend to be quiet
She could make me smile
When I was so mad I could cause I riot
You can make the bottom smaller
And turn it into
When mad, could cause a riot.
Or something like that.
Sorry.
I know I have different
Poetry style than yours.
So try to make it as you as possible.