Tired eyes that never sleep
teasing the mind to behold
dreams of a fairytale story
that was never meant to be told

That was my favorite stanza, knowing you like I do, this was a worthwhile poem, you never cease to amaze. Great writing, Denise

This was a really deep poem T, you put a lot of heart and soul into this one.......a beautiful masterpiece.

"dreams of a fairytale story
that was never meant to be told"

I loved that couplet, it seemed like a dream that was just within reach but the time was never right..
Of course, that may just be my mind running away with me.
You have an amazing talent and i feel very prievledged to have received a comment from you
5/5
*Gem*

Eh, I don't think you can get rid of Bozo that easily! :) I think he will be with you forever, no matter how deep you try to bury him!

Very nice poem, though! Loved every word!

Heaven once a promising goal
now seeming light years away
finding oneself in a tattered mess
leading the heart to dismay
^^^^
Oh mercy what a hard hitting stanza.

My death, prematurely reported
lies here upon written page
^^^^
The sadness in these 2 lines just float of the page and tears penetrate my heart.

Wonderfully penned as always dear Timothy
Take care

Nice poem. I miss that Bozo .. I have problems recalling ... did he die when I got old or did I just grow too old to continue enjoy him?

--Sher

Beautiful write, you captured emotions. I wish I could say more, but sometimes you just can't find the words:) It's undescribable...if you know what I mean.

Damn Tim! This is simply beyond words.

I've read it five times now and still can't comment....Just WOW!!!!

In a way i can relate to this poem and while reading it, i came to realise a few things so thank you for posting such a great piece of art :) i think it is anyway :)) i gave it 5/5 :)