Comments : That girl we used to be

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle

    I like this poem. I really liked the interpretation of a friendship into a single person, and the eccentuation of how powerful the relationship was by describing two people as one.

    I don't know if this really matters but there were a couple spelling errors, "tho she cant shine threw"
    *through
    *though
    I don't think you really care about that, just though I'd point it out, haha sorry. Anyway good read. I can definitely relate to the feeling of loss and how bad it can get when losing someone that close to your heart

  • 17 years ago

    by Iflookscouldkill

    Wow that is really great
    Really explains my
    Ended friendship
    hope this get better

    jessie