There is something wrong in the first line of "maybe adoption". check it out and you will see

It does not only happen to teenage mums ,i was almost 22 when I had my first ,loved his dad so very much ,thought he loved me too ,but then he went off with someone else ,made all the right promises to be there for our baby but never was.I was lucky I had my parents to get me through.That baby is 14 now ,along the way theres been times I found it hard but I love him dearly and wouldn't be without him.A great write you've cone here ,well done to you.

I LOVE IT! Its so ture in the real world! But no adoption isnt the answer your daughter needs you, if he doesnt want to be there then let him not be there because when your daughter gets older its you that she'll appreciate!

I really liked this, it conveyed a strong message although some of the stanzas didn't quite flow, but I really enjoyed it, good work =]

Honey if u ever need anything for Jasmine just let me know i'll do whatever i can for u. i love you both so much, and u did the right thing u have a wonderful daughter and a great mother to her.

This is very good...it has a very strong message to it, and sadly its very true. but your daughter will appreciate you for what you decide to do, cause either way she'll know you love her and want the absolute best for her. keep it up.