This was good. I know how you feel! they are annoying lol. anyway they poem flowed and rhymed pretty good. please keep up the great work. 5/5

I have read over three pieces and have concluded that of you were to be writing to some one only your work would hold alot of merrit but as for writing for the general public I think your lacking a great deal. Your work has some good rythming schemes but I think your too young of a writer to put your true talents in focus. Youth is as they say is wasted on the youth but. I think if you got older and kept these pieces you would realize where I am coming from. Please Keep Writing but explore the different ways of expessing the ideas you wish to convey. This will make your work hold alot more power and direct that passion in the right way Plot121.

This one was good...beautiful poem..it flowed well..n i think u deserve a 5/5 for this good wrk!
xxPoojaxx

Hey gurl thats what guys do dont let it get down i still love u and always will. if ya ever need me u know how to get a hold of me. i love u gurl.