Your poem tells a very interesting and captivating story. Very talented!

Baby....as Chris said..brilliant. THIS is what I mean when I say I could never write like you in a million years..all of my poems seem to be pointed in your direction, yes(can't help it you're my obsession nowdays!)(and always) but to come up with an idea like this? Where do you pull these things from??
Were you a cowboy/renegade/outlaw in another life???hahaha..I don't care who you were/are sooo in love with this poem and more in love with you...and one day, will cup your hands in my face..and will be your bride. Love you baby...Mich

By the way..the entire thing was captivating..but that last line was breathtaking..wonderful babe.xxx

WOW
i think chris and Michelle has said it all
but i like to make a twat of myself so i'm still gonna comment lol
fab job great great lines i lovde it all
never stop and you got to go paper back or even better hard bk and as chris said before on a diff comment i wont a signed copy
fab
all my love
lorna
xxx