by Michelle Mar 10, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
Go on, toss me into the void of your memory along with the other hearts not worth remembering |
by turtle
Like what the others said, you have an incredible vocabulary. To be honest when i saw your poem i almost didn't read it. (its length kinda scared me 0_o) anyways i'm glad i did! it was great..it showed great emotion.. |
by Mousie
Wow, i was blown away by that, i don't know why you have such a low rating for it. it was harder, like you can't just read it and get it you sort of have to concentrate and read it a couple times to get it, but i think that's what true poetry is all about, if it's easy to interpret it's boring and not unique. i praise you for your writing, you've taken it to the next level, and sometimes that's not found on this website, heck i'm sure my poems aren't that hard to figure out. great job!!! 5/5 definitely |
Wow. the words you chose to use created such a raw, intense emotion. |
by Ashley Ann
Wow thats a long poem.. good job your very talented..5/5 |
by Lucifer
Very nice poem, very powerful and discriptive |