Go

by Michelle   Mar 10, 2007


Go on, toss me into the void of your memory along with the other hearts not worth remembering
bury me in the hollow soul of misery which you call your own
Swallow me with taunts and reminisce of your success
A hero in your own mind to have created such a plague

Alright, just sing low
whisper your broken promises and I'll scream your lies
analyze those expressions that followed your ill betrayal
how long has it been since you've made me smile?

alright, whisper softly
ill praise your treacheries for you
you have not the heart nor care to redeem your shallow intensions
so I was left here and have since burned
I have scorched in flame of hatred for you
and what you left me here to breathe in
you held those instruments of which to heal my scars
but chose instead to take all you had and run

Come now lovely,
Whisper those hollow tunes you used to play
Or have you no memory of those stories you had sung
I suppose I can look back now and interpret the signs
But you must have melted them into your pages for they seem to be non-existing

Come now darling,
Deny the neglect which you had placed upon me
caressed into a throbbing pain inside your head
soothed you seem to have suppressed your conscience
Through this I will not let you forget

Surely, I have not been erased?
Do not forbid me of rights torn from regret
You have not the ability to reform this image into nothing
How could you so easily wipe away this form,
While I lay here, spilling out my rage while the virus in my torso enflames

I cannot erase you, my image of everlasting anger
I cannot bring myself to forget you
I cannot bring myself to forgive you

No, you shall stay my forever blasphemy and I your forgotten,
Your forgotten.

(this is a revision of a poem I wrote about a year ago on a separate account on this site. Re-reading it I wasn't happy with the work, so I changed it around a bit. Enjoy)

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  • 17 years ago

    by turtle

    Like what the others said, you have an incredible vocabulary. To be honest when i saw your poem i almost didn't read it. (its length kinda scared me 0_o) anyways i'm glad i did! it was great..it showed great emotion..

    i had to read some lines twice though.. but overall 5/5.. the last line was my fave.

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Wow, i was blown away by that, i don't know why you have such a low rating for it. it was harder, like you can't just read it and get it you sort of have to concentrate and read it a couple times to get it, but i think that's what true poetry is all about, if it's easy to interpret it's boring and not unique. i praise you for your writing, you've taken it to the next level, and sometimes that's not found on this website, heck i'm sure my poems aren't that hard to figure out. great job!!! 5/5 definitely

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    Wow. the words you chose to use created such a raw, intense emotion.
    i loved the first verse! your anger really shone thru. this was created from pure talent. well done hun.
    Much Love And Many Kisses, Bex.

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashley Ann

    Wow thats a long poem.. good job your very talented..5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Lucifer

    Very nice poem, very powerful and discriptive
    5/5
    keep the good work up

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