The vocabulary is very intense, but perhaps the level overthrows the poem. It seems a bit mucky. Just the same, the content is nice

{4/5}

[PygmyPuff]

Very nice poem, very powerful and discriptive
5/5
keep the good work up

Wow thats a long poem.. good job your very talented..5/5

Wow. the words you chose to use created such a raw, intense emotion.
i loved the first verse! your anger really shone thru. this was created from pure talent. well done hun.
Much Love And Many Kisses, Bex.

Wow, i was blown away by that, i don't know why you have such a low rating for it. it was harder, like you can't just read it and get it you sort of have to concentrate and read it a couple times to get it, but i think that's what true poetry is all about, if it's easy to interpret it's boring and not unique. i praise you for your writing, you've taken it to the next level, and sometimes that's not found on this website, heck i'm sure my poems aren't that hard to figure out. great job!!! 5/5 definitely

Like what the others said, you have an incredible vocabulary. To be honest when i saw your poem i almost didn't read it. (its length kinda scared me 0_o) anyways i'm glad i did! it was great..it showed great emotion..

i had to read some lines twice though.. but overall 5/5.. the last line was my fave.