by Twisted Heart Mar 10, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
God looked down on earth one day |
by Gem
Oh wow Jeannie... |
by *Charisma*
WOWWOWWOW!!! I mean, this is sooooo good....i could completely and totally picture this whole piece in my head, and the torrid rain and teardrops being repetitive parts was very visual and effective. A new favorite poem of mine with a fabulous ending to boot! |
This poem is brilliant!! |