Comments : Can she escape her fate

  • Wow, I like your poem u got a lot of emotions in it....i give it a 5/5..... can u tell me what u think of my poems rate and comment them please

  • 17 years ago

    by lost soul!

    I really like that it seem like i was in that gurl shoes.

  • I thought it was really good but alot of it did not rhyme but it made a good point and was it true

    i ha the same thing happen to me but i didnt kill them
    um comment my poems apprectiate it so much

    later much luv (valerie)

  • 17 years ago

    by AmazingOne

    Wow.
    intense.
    but i absolutely loved it!
    amazing.
    Great job!
    Bravo!
    =]

  • 17 years ago

    by MeganLeigh

    I love this poem. I hope this didn't accually happen. 5/5. Very strong.