by unique Mar 10, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I feel so horrible |
by Viola
Wow this is so deep and emotional. i could feel your pain while reading it. even though the vocabulary is simple it's written in such a way that it really does bring out the emotion you intended. great work! it's a truly sorrowful but beautiful poem. keep it up! =] |
by becca
This is really well written and deep. I can really realte to it, and i think that most people can. But however much we do things that hurt others, we have to look at the times we made them feel good, made them smile. a really great piece of work! keep it up! xXx |