This is really well written and deep. I can really realte to it, and i think that most people can. But however much we do things that hurt others, we have to look at the times we made them feel good, made them smile. a really great piece of work! keep it up! xXx

Wow this is so deep and emotional. i could feel your pain while reading it. even though the vocabulary is simple it's written in such a way that it really does bring out the emotion you intended. great work! it's a truly sorrowful but beautiful poem. keep it up! =]
and hold your head up too sweety. i'm sure you have at least made one person happy with your presence. "to the world you might be one person, but to one person you might be the world." remember that. if you ever need someone to talk to PM, k? I'm always here to listen.
but great work on the poem. i will check out some of your other ones as well. :)
--Viola