by Karl Wild GG23 Mar 10, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
first love
The word forever is often spoken, |
by xxSuicidalxx
I'm speechless....that was beautiful. It was totally amazing! A great read. the flow was never off....and reading the fisrt stanza captures you and pulls you right in to the poem. Amazing job on this! Keep writing!!!!!!!!:) |
Really deep and interesting, I like the topic and the way you wrote it was good. It is simple and easy to understand yet very deep and powerful. |
The poem completely fits my life. I see so many hearts getting broken and so many fake "love" that I end up refusing to try anything with that subject. Good poem |
by Alissa
OH MY, |
by Cassie Cain
Good poem |