by NicholasRyan
Haha ill try and call you today, on my house number just dont call me back if you see 630 its me iight. but yeah ill ttyl or something peace nick. |
by Brittany
Hi i came across one of your poems and i really liked it so i looked at ur profile and read almost every one. ur very good and i admire ur style of writing. i look forward to reading more and hopefully some new ones.:-) |
by Zach Buenger
This was a very nicely written poem, the organization was almost flawless and it also had a very neat rhyming scheme. While it had all this, it also portrayed a very vivid image in my head of what one might be going through, Very nice write and please keep up the good work... I saw you commented on my "poem" and i thank you for that, and sooner or later "he" will appreciate that you are trying to get in contact with him. If you can't now, just be patient and soon you will be able to. Email is a good idea, write what you are feeling and anything else that you think might help and send it, its the thought that will count... thanks and GOOD LUCK! |
by DeViN sCoTt
Thats a really good poem... |
Wow this poem is so so amazing babe, i cud realli feel what you were saying and i can so relate to this. keep up the good work, ur so talented. 5/5 |
I love clif hangers.. with a double edge of a meening to boot... but what gets me tweeked out is the fact that you could write a fictional write like this and still be detached from the severe meening of it.. is it the fact that it's so extreme and explicit that it's numbing? the whole time i was reading this i could feel nothing but pain and hopelessness... you really got your point across,,, powerful writing all in all.. |