Comments : My beginning

  • 17 years ago

    by NicholasRyan

    Haha ill try and call you today, on my house number just dont call me back if you see 630 its me iight. but yeah ill ttyl or something peace nick.

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany

    Hi i came across one of your poems and i really liked it so i looked at ur profile and read almost every one. ur very good and i admire ur style of writing. i look forward to reading more and hopefully some new ones.:-)

  • 17 years ago

    by Zach Buenger

    This was a very nicely written poem, the organization was almost flawless and it also had a very neat rhyming scheme. While it had all this, it also portrayed a very vivid image in my head of what one might be going through, Very nice write and please keep up the good work... I saw you commented on my "poem" and i thank you for that, and sooner or later "he" will appreciate that you are trying to get in contact with him. If you can't now, just be patient and soon you will be able to. Email is a good idea, write what you are feeling and anything else that you think might help and send it, its the thought that will count... thanks and GOOD LUCK!

  • 17 years ago

    by DeViN sCoTt

    Thats a really good poem...

  • 16 years ago

    by i wish upon a star

    Wow this poem is so so amazing babe, i cud realli feel what you were saying and i can so relate to this. keep up the good work, ur so talented. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by alive in death

    I love clif hangers.. with a double edge of a meening to boot... but what gets me tweeked out is the fact that you could write a fictional write like this and still be detached from the severe meening of it.. is it the fact that it's so extreme and explicit that it's numbing? the whole time i was reading this i could feel nothing but pain and hopelessness... you really got your point across,,, powerful writing all in all..

    and thank you for reading my stuff