by Cindy Mar 10, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Release me from these chains that hold me |
by David
The first stanza was so excellent. it was very moving and just calmed the reader down. |
by jackie
Another good poem 5/5 |
by Kristen
Beautiful. |
Really nicely done!!! Enjoyed the flow and write, overall. |
by moonlil
Excellent poem. Love all the words. |