Beautifully penned. Full of emotion. Excellent job!

Cindy,

Such a beautiful and peaceful piece of art. You have described it wonderfully. The flow was flawless and lent a sense of contentment to the rhythmn.

Excellent Job
Jeannie

Heythats such a good poem, i like the wordsyou have used and the structure. wow its fantastic x x x x x x x x
keep writing xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Nicely written Cindy. what a beautiful vision. Love, Debbie

Very beautiful!!!!

Excellent.
The words usage was incredible & you had your emotions pouring out through every word. Lovely poetry that you have written here. I always love reading your poems, they're so heartfelt & you never hold anything back when writing. Marvelous job hun.
Keep it up! 5/5

Much luv.
Stay strong...
Stephanie Lynn .+.

This is really so beautifully written dear

Where the sun is forever shining
Reflecting on the turquoise water below
Forever wrapped in the warmth of your love
Gone feelings of heartache and sorrow

could feel passion overflowing and its so easy to drown within ur words...ultimate dear....u r the best

all the best and take care

This is an elegant write. Emotion is overflowing from each and every word you wrote. I loved it.

Best Wishes
Michelle

"Two souls melting together as one
United in love where we both belong"

I can relate to a lot of the feelings in this poem, especially the last two lines.
Great write
5/5. Marcus

Fantasic last 2 lines, they make the poem just that more special, well done xox

It's very sweet and nicely described... Yeah... I think it ends very well... Lovely writing!

Wow! This definitely has a melody to it! 5/5

What a beautiful poem Cindy.
Great job.

Another good write cindy. your happiness will find you once again. I know it will. 5/5 from me. best wishes

Again ur last line is fabulous, there is such a sense of depth here in your emotion and it comes straight through in ur words i'm looking forward to the next piece :) xox sam

This was so beautiful.
The imagery you used here was just perfect.
You did such a wonderful job on this, I loved it.

I really enjoyed this poem.. It was very well written! Awesome Work!

Excellent poem. Love all the words.

Really nicely done!!! Enjoyed the flow and write, overall.

Beautiful.