This is also a great poem!! you are creative in all of your poems and that is a great thing! if all these poems are true about some girl that done that to you then i am sorry.

God bless you and keep up the great work!!

amber

Nice work bud and yea. I find true poems are more meaningful and heartfelt and they seem to flow.

I love the rose metaphor, it just tells the story wonderfully. The title makes me think of a song by a band called Tatu. Great poem.

Aww... this is soo sweet and so tragic.

More beautiful it grows.

That's my favourite line.
Very cute and sweet.
This is the nicest poem, but in a sad kinda way.
I loved it
5/5 much love .xx

Genius!! Love the idea of the petals and flower.. She loves me she loves me not!! Whoever she was.. Must have been crazy for walking away from someone with such a heart and talent!!