I really think this poem shows how good of a writer you really are! Its got every thing that I personally look for in a poem. Rhyme and flow! 5/5!

Wow, i like the internal plot. very nice

[5/5]

PygmyPuff

Now you're back on your usual track.

Is it just me, or do I keep on rhyming?
GAH!!! I am.
5/5