This is so beautiful. Love the imagery. Great collab. you two...

Wow! Amazing piece Angela, and Michael! A work well done. This was very beautiful...So peaceful and breathtaking. The imagery was astounding...I captured every moment in my mind. Other poets should be able to captivate readers more like this. Keep it up!

Simple, descriptive imagery, undisturbed flow...what else can i say about perfection...? Very well written you two!

Beautiful and elegant. LOVE IT

Very well written, nice job.

I love nature poems!!!

Wow, the imagery in this poem is so captivating, so... breathtaking... Amazing collab, every stanza is flawless, the wording is excellent, and the atmosphere is somehow magical.
5/5 from me

Wow, amazing piece, it has so powerful rhythm and it is simple beautiful. Imagery, atmosphere and every emotion is wonderfully expressed. Well done!