A Love So Deep

Watch how Sunny's advice can turn around a poem with extra words...read this....

Shining stars looking down upon a love
stronger than any other
growing steadily
this love has consumed two hearts
with the greatest potential to last
burning with a fiery passion
producing kisses beyond magic
feelings beyond words can explain
a love that makes her want to shout to the world that she's found someone
he has the heart that matches hers
and you'll never find a love so deep

JUST LIKE THAT!! Your poem is reborn!!! :) Very nice work! I love the descriptive words that you use in your poetry! When we can see it and feel it...it's great! You got something...write...come in the group and participate in some of the challenges...you're writing will improve if you do. If the way to do it...we all did and we're still evolving with the group's help!!! You got something girl...don't let it die because of anyone else!!!!

I enjoyed reading!!

Again very sweet you must love your bf very much. Yorl ike me nobody expected me to write because i look like your typical bimbo dumbass but im not i love writing i write for my boy also but also to open peoples eyes about society.

xxx alex xxx