Comments : A Love So Deep

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Again very sweet you must love your bf very much. Yorl ike me nobody expected me to write because i look like your typical bimbo dumbass but im not i love writing i write for my boy also but also to open peoples eyes about society.

    xxx alex xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Watch how Sunny's advice can turn around a poem with extra words...read this....

    Shining stars looking down upon a love
    stronger than any other
    growing steadily
    this love has consumed two hearts
    with the greatest potential to last
    burning with a fiery passion
    producing kisses beyond magic
    feelings beyond words can explain
    a love that makes her want to shout to the world that she's found someone
    he has the heart that matches hers
    and you'll never find a love so deep

    JUST LIKE THAT!! Your poem is reborn!!! :) Very nice work! I love the descriptive words that you use in your poetry! When we can see it and feel it...it's great! You got something...write...come in the group and participate in some of the challenges...you're writing will improve if you do. If the way to do it...we all did and we're still evolving with the group's help!!! You got something girl...don't let it die because of anyone else!!!!

    I enjoyed reading!!