by Sarah Ann Mar 11, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I want to lie in your arms forever, |
Sarah! This poem is sure telling me something! Are you really writing what you feel or are you just writing for nothing. if you say the second answer I wont believe you. |
by OHgreenman
WOW!! You've put alot of emotion into this piece and it blows me away! |
by Liz
Read this poem yesterday...dunno why I didn't comment it then. But I'm glad I read it again tonight. It's just so amazing. This is the type of poem I wish I could actually relate to. Lol. But not yet, I guess. Anyways...I really liked the last stanza. Beautiful write. |
by Annabel
This is so touching ... it explains feelings many of us have felt in such a beautiful way, you should be proud of yourself 5/5 xxxx |
WOW amazing! Its so heartfelt and i love how it seems that you were in my head when you wrote it. I can relate to it so much. |