*Seth's mouth drops* Very nice poem. The selection of words has to be the most capturing personality of this poem. I find it a reflection of intelligence. Very nice write, Meaningful and flowed very nicely. I'd love to read more. I read your profile, and also your past comments on other writes. I like your criticism. That's what i need for my poems, But i don't get much. There is always room for learning from mistakes and that's what i'm looking for.. Take a read on my poem Daddy did it. I'd love to hear what you have to say. But i'm going to stop rambling. VERY nice write. 5/5

Awwww.. im all tingling. my eyes are watering! no joke. this was so soft delicate BEAUTIFUL. *wipes tears away to see the darn computer*

2938742891748937 outa 5.

great great fabulous job.

Do you still have that website where you place other poems. Have you ever ventured into publishing. I'd be buying your published work.

i love your writing.