Forgive me brother

by kimara4955   Mar 11, 2007


You once told me i was strong,
you showed me love, when no-one else would,
you sheltered me from those violent nights alone,
you rescued me from my pain, with those open loving arms.

I've let you down
forgive me brother

you once told me you loved me.
you listened when no-one else would,
you respected me, for me, and not for my mistakes,
you rescued me form depression, as you took the time to help.

I've let you down
forgive me bother

you once told me i was special,
you gave me space, when no-one else would,
you excepted me into your life and your home,
you rescued me from my death, by giving me a reason and someone to live for.

I've let you down
forgive me brother?

your my friend
my brother
my life.

i love you Brian

i hope you all like it, mainly the person who i wrote it for Brian, another wise known as Lucifer on here. he is my hero and always will be. comment welcome. xx take care xx

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  • 13 years ago

    by BlackenedInnocence

    I love this piece. It made me cry. Ive been writing a piece of my own for my brother as well. But now Im not sure I can get the words down so perfectly, as you did. Thank you for the inspiration. Brothers are irreplaceable, are they not ? 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Solus

    Spoken from the heart as all poems should be. And it is good that now you know the goodness and love men can give if but just willing....sadly the horrors of men are seen all to often.....

  • 17 years ago

    by Claudd

    O

    that poem touched me

    god i wish i had a brother like yours
    mine is gay :P

  • 17 years ago

    by silence kills

    Very nice i like the form you used ^^ 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Mads Avnboeg

    Great poem, comes almost without saying ;-) There is a dark tropic underlined in it, hope your have passed that corner, but eloquent written poem.