Comments : Forgive me brother

  • 17 years ago

    by Lucifer

    O

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Glad you have someone in your life like this. Friends are one of our greatest treasures.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by eduard dionio

    Nice poem...hope i could write as good as you...!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Mads Avnboeg

    Great poem, comes almost without saying ;-) There is a dark tropic underlined in it, hope your have passed that corner, but eloquent written poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by silence kills

    Very nice i like the form you used ^^ 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Claudd

    O

    that poem touched me

    god i wish i had a brother like yours
    mine is gay :P

  • 17 years ago

    by Solus

    Spoken from the heart as all poems should be. And it is good that now you know the goodness and love men can give if but just willing....sadly the horrors of men are seen all to often.....

  • 13 years ago

    by BlackenedInnocence

    I love this piece. It made me cry. Ive been writing a piece of my own for my brother as well. But now Im not sure I can get the words down so perfectly, as you did. Thank you for the inspiration. Brothers are irreplaceable, are they not ? 5/5