My Heart Broke For Humanity

Exceptional job on this one. With so much sorrow and injustice in the world it is easy to see your message in this one.

Very strong statements but executed nicely in this poem which made it enjoyable to read... =)

A very powerful message within your words. Beautifully written from the heart.

You make me really happy that you could write poetry! I love this poem. its a masterpiece!

Everyday I wonder what it will bring
There are two roads life can turn on
And I whispered to myself today,
Are we a proud civilization?
Who ever wanted this?

I pray for the day the world would see,

This heart weeps for humanity.
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^^ I effing love those lines. I love the whole poem!!! Its just djfahsdf. I love the whole "My heart weeps for humanity". You make me wanna write another poem like the one I wrote...lol. This is just amazing. I love every line. Maybe we should....trade poems...? Hahaha.
5/5 Keep writing!!

-` Liz