GOODBYE

by V a n i t y V e i n 6 9   Mar 11, 2007


I love you
Always have always will
Without you
My soul is to grow ill

Me and you
are ment to be together
Our souls are bound
Forever

We'd cry and cry
We'd bleed
We had each other
That's all we'd need

We'd play, We'd hit
And won't feel a thing
We'd joke and we'd laugh
so hard it would sting

time without you
Is something i fear
You know I love you
Hell, I'm still here

I'm crying like
You are to die
What I'm trying to say is...
Goodbye

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  • 17 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Hey sorry i haven't commented in a very long time on any of your work i've been going through a very hard time. . .and thanks for all your comments on my work. . .you ok? this poem is so sad so heart breaking the softer side seems to be coming out more and more in your work good job keep it up
    stay strong,
    auna

  • 17 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    I like it but it's not the best. The word's are kinda what made it seem just a little bland. I guess you need to work on the diction but strange enough I did like it cuz of the emotion. Flow's off every now and then but overall I enjoyed it.
    ~Faith-less

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