I like it but it's not the best. The word's are kinda what made it seem just a little bland. I guess you need to work on the diction but strange enough I did like it cuz of the emotion. Flow's off every now and then but overall I enjoyed it.
~Faith-less

Hey sorry i haven't commented in a very long time on any of your work i've been going through a very hard time. . .and thanks for all your comments on my work. . .you ok? this poem is so sad so heart breaking the softer side seems to be coming out more and more in your work good job keep it up
stay strong,
auna