This is really cute:) |
by rebeccaxX
Awesome..ur one of my fav writers on here |
by Jenie
Wow this was awsome!! |
Very nice, was getting into the moment there for a second. 5/5 |
by Dance Girlie
That is ahdorable :] |
by Breeeezie
Omg this is soooo beautiful!!!!! makes me want to cry.. it took my breathe away!!!! |
by Sara
Looking in her eyes, |
by janiL
Nice.. Ü |
by kitkat girl
This is a really sweet poem. I like how you put the title in the ending line. |
by jojo88
Wow I love it 1000/1000 |
It's sweet. Rhyming in some areas is off but the imagery made up for it. I'll give it a four. |
by Kelsie
I like this poem because i can totally relate to it. i know how it feels. this poem is beautiful. 5/5 |
by Kris
WOW! GREAT, LOVED IT!!!!! |
Really good. i loved it! i liked this poem cuz it gives an idea on how guys feel when they're about to kiss someone they like. 5/5 |
I love this...really good 5/5 |
by PJ
Another Excellent Poem. I Love It |
by Riffy
Awww this is so beautiful! |
Adorable!<3 |
Wow I really enjoyed this poem it flows so smoothly. |
by Grace
Ahhhhh sweet poem!! 5/5! =) |