It's Fate

When lifeâ??s too heavy to sedate
always remember look inside your fate.

great poem, great work with the rhymes, and the ending: great message! 5/5

Oh and remember to take our the ' in your poem.

had to add that.

i cant vote twice tho. but if i could i would give you another 5. still great poem

David

Special and inevitable. two words i didn't even consider to use cause they would never rhyme. but they do.

well done. ill comment some more now!

5/5 David

That was amazing!!!!!!! i loved the way every verse rhymed! wow that was soo great and i can only wish to write poems that are as great as yours!!...5/5...thanks for the comment btw...comment back?!