Pain (Etheree)

by Sarah Ann   Mar 11, 2007


Pain
Bleeding
Preceding
Broken heartaches
Remembered mistakes
Crossing out the voices
That ricochets off choices
And binds you endlessly to wrath
Capturing darkness so to mislead
Then hearts will suffer woe or be released.

Etheree: A poetry form that consists of 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables.

(My first time trying this. Written for a challenge. Heh...)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Melissa

    *High Five*

    Definately one of my faves! ;o)

  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    You certainly conquered this challenge. Great write love. I enjoyed reading it. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*SugarCube*~

    Its good.

  • 17 years ago

    by ben thompson

    I thought it was a good write. I like the word choices. best wishes

  • 17 years ago

    by *Isolde*

    Owwwwwwwowwwwwwwwwwwwww....lol blister vat u do??? oo yea ,,,vat is da mater vit u vats ur name....vat is da mater vit u vat ur name....looooooooool...anyhow ill see u in a bit.

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