And binds you endlessly to wrath
Capturing darkness so to mislead
Then hearts will suffer woe or be released.
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^ I loved those lines. It's always been hard for me to write this type of poem. I don't think I could've pulled it off like you. I loved it!! 5/5

-` Liz

I haven't tried this style before, and I hope mine turns out just as good as this one.

"Remembered mistakes
Crossing out the voices
That ricochets off choices"

I love those lines!! Very well done for your first time.

Nice etheree! Love these lines- "Crossing out the voices
That ricochets off choices"
^^^ Great wording!

Me like it! me like it!

Wonderful job with this Etheree.... heartfelt and deep! Well done sweets, such beautiful talent!

Hey,
I'm not to sure on these types of poems, but none the less i liked it, short and got the meaning of your poem out nicely... Good work =)

Wow for a first timer you have done exceptionally well...(i still haven't finished mine yet...) as always you have this unbelievable way of expressing yourself...no way I coulda done it any better myself! Awesome write!

Wow great job for your first attemp or any attempt for that matter

Owwwwwwwowwwwwwwwwwwwww....lol blister vat u do??? oo yea ,,,vat is da mater vit u vats ur name....vat is da mater vit u vat ur name....looooooooool...anyhow ill see u in a bit.

I thought it was a good write. I like the word choices. best wishes

Its good.

You certainly conquered this challenge. Great write love. I enjoyed reading it. 5/5

*High Five*

Definately one of my faves! ;o)