I'm not entirely sure what possessed me to write this piece. It's nothing to do with my past relationships. At least, I don't think they are.

I tried to add some references to Just Another, but I'm not sure how apparent they are (it was written at 11:30pm). I believe I tried to add some points on religion, insanity, reminiscence and obsession, all in the essence of the mind, which we all know is a transcendant, mysterious thing.

I'm going to try and write some more poetry in thought narrative, because I can try.

Feedback immensely appreciated.

Well however you came accross this peice.. its really good... im glad you wrote it... keep it up... you never know what will happen in the future.. you may have a career....:-) good job

This was beautiful...a true work of art, and a wonderful projection of poetry. Keep it up.