Your great! i cant believe that you are only 14 and can write as well as the professionals! i really did think that you were one! great job! and another thing...never stop writing. You have plenty of publicity on your pomes then i do times 20! keep it up! 5/5

Awseom poem!! I agree with this other chick if I didn't know you already I would think that you are a professional! You are great at poetry! 5/5

I really liked your wording,unusual for a good,And so sweet this girl should be if it's not imaginery
Keep it up
See ya
Laura

Awww this is really good and quite adorable but it's a little cliche but that's all right I have a few of those myself just try to step outside the box next time alright great job!

Awww...thts sweet.. i like this poem i think tht ppl can relate to this..makes me smile a lil lol idk y..